Quiet Poetry Lounge : As we lay....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Oct 10, 2005.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As we lay I wonder if I made a mistake by being here
    Since you chose not to keep us near
    I wonder why we are wasting each other time
    Since our flow seems not to rhyme
    When we make love it sometimes seems dry
    When we arguing I'm yelling out I wish you die
    Baby you know we can't carry on this way
    I think we grown apart till we have nothing to say
    I love you hate
    You go I wait
    I cry you sigh
    You drink I get high
    See how were not on the same cord
    I like chevy you a Ford
    As we lay i turn to watch our dreams fade away
    For us to ponder this we have another day
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime to divide bring equal
    a whole from the friction

    well felt scribe kinda make one wonder when life is twisted .
     
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    Life is too short, to not get the fullest of everything. If the end has come..accept it and move on, you both will cherrish it in the long run.
     
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    i appreciate the words it so hard to let go of something so wrong
     
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    we get in the mix of what is at times
    i feel ya yes sometime it's hard to let go
    even when it's wrong !
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep your rite youngblood
     
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    tru dat indeed .............keep flowing as i'm enjoying
     
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    rich i'm noticing that you give kinds words to people who post. i will say this i appreciate any times someone view but even better when reply. thnks for the support.:kiss2:
     
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    to richy rich$$$$$$.....

    rich just wanted to say your a fine man as i reminscence on this piece. since the day i first started. no matter who you are you still give a positive comment. thanks for the acknowledgement. whew there:spinstar: :ilu:
     
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    Yes dont paunder on the past
    The future is to bright
    I love this flow
    Beautiful Sista Nevar