Black Poetry : As We Lay

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jun 1, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ceiling fan blades move quietly above our bed
    We stare at its moving shadow
    The breeze fails to cool us

    We've burned through the sheets
    A sweet, sweet burn
    Now we rest
    As we lay

    Our breathing syncronized
    An unconscious attempt to continue our glorious rhythm
    A rhythm we never want to end
    But the heated rush could not be contained
    The multiple explosions too natural
    Too intense

    We smile in love's afterglow
    Shoulder to shoulder
    Thigh to thigh
    In the heat of the day
    As we lay

    BE
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DOOOOGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGgggg

    yall betta get some fire proof sheetz next tyme. :toast:
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seeee now thats what I'm talking bout !

    you know its good when the moment lasts even in the aftermath
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin

    this.


    a
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE...

    spectacular imagery...

    the scene you painted here... has been
    indelibly etched on my mind. thank you.

    SunShyne~