Black Poetry : As We Lay

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  1. Buttercup

    Buttercup Member MEMBER

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    As we lay.......I see
    your form, your strength, your weaknesses
    I see your beauty, your soul your meekness
    as we lay

    As we lay.......I feel
    your heat, your passion, your aggression, the rise and fall of your chest as you breath
    I feel your sweat, your love, your body crying out in ecstay
    as we lay

    We both moved like animals of the night
    we both have cried out in the course of this flight
    and now we lay......
    basking, flowing, enjoying and yet motionless
    we both, now wet from the passion, lie still
    each mesmerized by the others will
    not really knowing what else to do
    so you just hold me close to you..........
    as we lay

    As we lay.......
    the heat start to rise and the flame begin to flare
    I realize that once again, we will go there
    you take me to the top of the mountain's peak
    floating in the clouds, just you and me
    we lay no longer still, basking in the glow
    but moving, swaying, soaring, flying,singing as we
    reach the heigth of our beings,
    our inner beings that love has now upon us bestowed

    Yes as we lay.......
    we come and go
    focusing, touching, caressing, wanting,
    and desiring the other
    letting go only to hold on, sweating, dripping.........tired
    as we lay
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow, Buttercup!

    Great imagery:
    We both moved like animals of the night
    we both have cried out in the course of this flight
    and now we lay......
     
  3. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful and very visual. Tyte!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    really super great flow ....tyte scribe sistah buttacup !
    gurl u know i miss ya flowz
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww butter....
    this made my breath studder..


    i visiolized it...
    beautifull
    keep writting
    much love libertylaida!
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    or is it stutter...lol...i,m sorry my dictionary
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.....this was amazing...i love it...
     
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    dang,! I loved this piece:)
     
  9. the_story

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    i am not worthy, this is wonderful gurl
    thanks for sharing
     
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    I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

    Amazingly erotic!:hot: