Black Poetry : ...as they lay.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by elayne., Oct 27, 2002.

  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fingertips touching fingertips
    his lips exploring her fuller lips
    as they lay
    hips pressing into hips &

    …he didn’t even try to
    slip inside…
    …extremely satisfied to
    lie between her blak thighs
    & tangibly memorize
    the sublime way it felt…
    being cradled so close to
    heaven&home

    hands gently caressing faces
    her legs encircling his waist
    as they lay
    moans encountering sighs &

    …she didn’t even want to
    close her eyes…
    …completely mesmerized
    by the quixotic fire that
    glowed from the windows of
    his soul… whispering
    that age old story of desires…
    waiting to be realized

    …& time ticks by
    as they lay…
    entwined in shared intimacy…

    he… kissing her collarbone
    their breaths mingling passionately
    she… licking his earlobe
    & lovewords are spoken softly
    …before they drift off to sleep
    (clothed fully).


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    layne

    the depth of your poetry lately just leaves me in awe....

    it's hot and sensual and sweet and peaceful and everything else all at once....

    just makes me wanna sigh eveytime I read it....

    K
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

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    Man gal!!!!! whew, that was deep and beautiful and sensous yet so honest...elayne, I espacially love the part :

    …he didn’t even try to
    slip inside…
    …extremely satisfied to
    lie between her blak thighs
    & tangibly memorize
    the sublime way it felt…
    being cradled so close to
    heaven&home

    Thank u for this piece...beautiful

    lo'
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl you know you talkin bout you and him so stop it please...... on the real i love the way you do this




    One
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well well !! dis be da kinda lovin i'm liking
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooooowwweeee !

    love, love,love what a beautiful thing !
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the poem personifies the true meaning of unconditional love. To have something so close, yet to not need it, because one is already satisfied with love.
    Thank you so much for sharing. I loved it.
    *Emma*
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    props to Rykah and Ubzorbshun for lettin' me know about dis....

    yeah l knew l'd put fear in your heart as y'all lay (fully clothed) :D

    playin'....
    lovin' it...
     
  9. mensahpoetic

    mensahpoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    i like this :D

    though i thought you were gonna flip it on some erotic type vibe...cuz i know how you do :)

    I really loved this one, baby...

    like i always tell you....you're elevating ;)
     
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    elayne...........
    well you know...
    ......hypnotizing...nice...
    10x10

    Verb