Black Poetry : As the Wheel Turns

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Dec 22, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as the wheels turns
    that circular pattern
    it is a path
    that we have travel
    slowly coming
    together as one
    the circle
    will soon be done
    from that cirlce
    a chain will form
    that is the strenght
    of US becoming one
    it is no longer
    a dream to me
    the wheels are turning
    like a cricle
    they way we travel
    as we come together
     
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    this was nice my sister
    flow on...Angel
     
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    A circle of life yet to come perhaps...nice write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as the wheel turn
    we become one
    under the mission
    from a dream out
    a vision of two
    now as one bonding
    closer & closer
    as the wheel turn
    inside the circle is
    ya divine love
    my warmth of arms
    as they mix to make
    it complete
    now i know it's not a
    dream but a reality
    in the wheel of a
    motion circle
     
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    Wonderfully written! :bowdown: I'm lovin' the spirit of encouragement and solidarity in this!
     
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