Quiet Poetry Lounge : As the weather turns nippy...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Nov 13, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the weather turns nippy,
    Thoughts of snuggling with a loved one abound.
    All I have to snuggle up with lately
    is a good book,
    and thoughts of when things were good.

    The first frost used to mean
    tasting hot chocolate on your lips,
    licking the whipped cream off your finger tips.
    Extra blankets to keep us warm,
    praying to be snowed in by the storm.
    Wrapped together, trying to contain our heat,
    There goes another perfectly good sheet.
    Waking up with intentions of scrambling eggs,
    An insatiable hunger softly begs.
    Finally exhausted we really did dread,
    the thought of having to get out of bed.

    As the weather turns nippy,
    Thoughts of snuggling with a loved one...
    is bound to happen.
    And things will be good with someone else,
    some day, again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt all dis here ....warmth
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice..
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for taking the time to respond Rich and Mzblkangel. Glad you could feel it.
     
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    very relax flow
    very nice
    feeling the comfort
    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tried to make it as relaxing as the memory, Bluewater, thanks.
     
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