Black Poetry : as the river flows...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, May 6, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve peered
    Once more
    Through the window of dreams
    Saw baskets of hope filled
    Motivation and things
    I sat by the river
    Listening to its quiet song
    A melodious flow
    …truly relaxing tune

    I thought as I sat
    How wonderful it be
    To sit in God’s country
    All alone
    With me.
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller ~

    Where ya' been hidin'? I'm glad to see you're back
    with your poetical flow... missed ya' Boo!!

    One :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    drowning in your...

    "i don't feel so good" piece.:)

    i'm here for a quick minute...two day later, i be off. but i'm here when i'm here.

    have a wonderful wonderful...and smile some.

    peace.
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't drown....

    Imma cum -- to the rescue! :lol:

    Thanks Boo!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop brutha i see u ova there ........
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a beautiful flowing poem. It gives such a peaceful image. Lookin forward to reading more
     
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