Black Poetry : As the *"Flow"et Flows…(Off the Dome)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Aug 20, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Checking 3rd "I" vision with dilated "I"s
    "I" watched the sun rise in direct unison 2
    the moon & the stars
    The 4sight of light blazed in the dimly lit
    background
    Giving my "I"s a surround mental picture in
    my own mind

    Yeah - in surround sound vision…"I"s slowly
    watching with "I"s closed 2 your imagination

    Touch my left mental orb 2 reach your connection
    With harmless intention catch a vibe of sight and
    sound with mental flowability baby-food 4 the soul

    Wreaking havoc on the mental; crushed, bruised, & torn
    Inflicted pain that digs deep; penalty much 2 steep
    Dire straits of malevolence flipped script 2 benevolence
    Flowin' wonderfully crooked in G-type prose

    Bob & weave like a boxer down for the count
    Punch drunk 2 the right & scarred 2 the bone
    Rest 4 the weary {mundane cliché meaning nothin'}
    The safehaven's flow is our own faulty snap logic

    With flicks of the Bics - 29cents beams approval of mind
    The *"flow"et laments 4 the lost book of matches
    Close cover before striking; you've been warned it should say
    Just burn hard on the stage filling up cafes & ripping up microphones

    Verbalize in rhyme & in spirit 2 give all a glance in2 my throb
    Stevie Wonderesque depth un2 & within maximus of lines
    Depth is perception; power is knowledge
    Just remember that **** when spittin' out vibes

    This "flow"et is done
    Leavin' the stage
    Out of time…

    *"Flow"et - Variant of Poet
     
  2. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well...

    All i can say is that this flow off da dome was tyte...WHOODY WHOOOOO! :)

    Love&Respect
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    "mental flowability baby-food 4 the soul"

    you know a brutha gotta like that line.:)...as with the rest of this G-type prose...str8 off da dome. flow dat.

    One.