Black Poetry : As Soon as I Get Home...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by waynethomas, Apr 25, 2007.

  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    You see
    The potential that I see
    Is some what different from what you seem you have seen within me
    As your
    Conversation comforting and holding my company
    Plays its part on days last journey
    Until locks are broken by my now frustrated keys
    Not as frustrated as I know you'll be
    Hearing each step creek
    Under my now shoeless feet
    The last creek to push on an opening
    An opening mirroring the facial in which this vision has me lost in
    A sight that has only been spread for me…

    What you need to be now doing for me is
    Bringing your fine presence over here before me
    In the vicinity
    Enough for me to whisper my pent up thoughts to you as I speak
    Then even closer
    That my lips may brush slowly over your soft exposed cheek
    Allowing you to finally give in to that feeling gently closing your eyes
    And from this
    I see you can't help but feel my
    Erotically intended smile with every verbal syllable
    My tongue smoothly flicks
    Sending teases to all of your need to be licked parts and tips…

    But the correct order to achieve this feet:
    Act on the feelings that fuel your from a bed far intense stares at me,
    Allow my eyes to share what the
    If removed,
    Draped silk sheets will lay bare
    And if you're then ready
    Follow the initial command that now has your eyes glowing
    And make sure your intently listening to me…
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    All I can say is... WOW... LET'S HEAR IT IN POETRY NIGHT ON FRIDAY!
    Keep on Poet...
    :shades:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This had a smooth erotic allure to it, poet. Agreeing with Yemoja's Goddess, it would be great to hear this on the mic on Friday noght in our chatroom!
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed it, this, it was such an easy flow, I couldn't wait to read the next line...lol


    Mz.Soulll (SoulChildWritten)
     
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