Black Poetry : As Opposed to You

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As Opposed to You
    <<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>

    T
    he pursuit of a woman is a very serious matter
    the fact that she's fine just illustrates
    how rigged the nefarious game is

    Cat and mouse does not begin
    to define the nature
    of the game or for
    that matter how
    it should be
    played

    As
    opposed
    to you player

    She
    is the
    cat's meow
    who purrs deeply
    to make you better

    Validate her
    lovely lofty status
    better men than you or I ~
    have succumb to her charm




    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought ~ who?
     
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    chuck Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Luv this rap:

    And also digging what's true about you too!
     
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    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    This flow is awesome.
     
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    nicely explained..and well written.
     
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