Black Poetry : AS MY SOUL VOWZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I stand here not only this day

    but on this day unto you

    to give my hand in complete


    I give my heart something unique

    and all that dear to me my sweet

    for my spirit trust u would treat it

    with gentle tender care


    This day as I accept thy love

    to cherish and behold above

    and compromise what's to come

    I give you total devotion


    my Trust and understanding

    to love all that comply unto u

    I give you peace in da valley

    and waves of better days


    I vow my all pitted deep within

    that we make this day our day

    a special moment in exsistance

    to embrace in forever memories

    I vow my soul
     
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    That's tight Rich..I just about got up the nerve to try this poetry thing out. Ive been reading yours and they are on it bruh.


    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big thankz , I'm most humbled ......Yes you should try it poetry is a release and relaxing
    feeling you get , I would love to read a piece of your work !
     
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    What a beautiful and unique heart, soul and poem!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Moham big thankz
     
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