Quiet Poetry Lounge : as my eyes blink

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Aug 16, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as my eyes blink
    they close the doors of ur physical beauty
    as i exit into a room
    of my mental fantasies
    dreaming of u waiting
    for me patiently
    wanting me
    as i walk down this hall way
    walking til i start to feel u touching me
    i fall
    for my my heart falls wit every pound of my body
    to the floor...
    cuz eww... dam.. i like the way ur hands can explore
    my maze and puzzle... connecting all my pieces into u
    as ur hands glide
    massaging my soft spots
    my eyes blink
    dam i'm starting to think
    in between these seconds my eyes are blessed wit site
    i see ur beauty in front of mine
    as i start to blink
    i wake up
    dreaming
    realizing i wasnt cuz ur really here....
    as my eyes blink
    love screams threw the air....
     
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    Loving this vibe....
    sweet release here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was lovely , when u close ya eye
    the sweet sight of love vanish til u open
    them and then we understand the true
    blessing and beauty of seeing ............
     
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    Sounds like pure beauty inside and out. The way you express yourself, you take your reader to that place, and force him/her to look.
     
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    Sista,

    It sounds like even though you blinked, you didn't miss a thing! Loved this flow. It was effortless. Continue to shine.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Daroc

    It felt so good you had to blink, huh? Now that's good loving. :lol: :D

    :thanks: for sharing your intimate thoughts and feelings with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Do yo thang...Daroc
    Cuz this was HOT...

    Loving the vibe here!
     
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