Black Poetry : As long as we stay friends

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  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    In the begining we started as friends
    But we crossed that line that makes it all end
    Not knowing what would happen, we gave it a try
    Each and every night we would sit and talk forever
    But nothing else mattered as long as we were together

    Anytime i neede her she was always there
    To tell me that, no matter what.... she would always care
    When i felt like crying she would wipe my tears
    And whisper "it'll be ok" softly in my ear

    Then after awhile i felt it start slipping away
    I could feel it comming, but there was nothing i could say
    One night we decided to let each other go
    We both agreed to it, but it hurt me so
    In the end maybe we will be together
    But the only thing that matters
    Is that we stay friends forever.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Make new friends but keep the old!

    It's hard to have someone special start to slip away.
    So when I think about it here's a few things that I say.
    Don't weep for what I lost, Thank God for what I had...
    Make new friends but keep the old , one in silver and
    the other in gold!
    Always in my heart though we be apart...friends you
    did begin...then you be friends until the end!

    Blessings On ya House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    friendship...... from da old 2 da new as long as we stay friendz
    indeed da heart will hold on to da promised friendship.....
    Nice flow
     
  4. Godfather

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    Must give you a shout and let u know that I am luvin this piece right here. I hear you loud and clear and wanna give u some respect for this. U talked to me.

    Peace
    Godfather
     
  5. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you, I been there
    Check out My piece"Love of my life"
    All that we feel, it never goes away, it is us who is doin the feelin, the only thing that changes is the object
    I think I may write a poem on this...thankx
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have to agree with Godfather cause you talked to me on this one too. nice and felt flow.

    Kimdricka A.K.A. Kim
     
  7. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    i want to thank everybody for showing me love. thanks for making me feel like im right at home.
     
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