Black Poetry : as it sounds

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Jan 9, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They tell me put the dope down
    See all I roll with is killas and gangsters

    Lets go
    see it was a trap for me not make it, gotta razor blade in my mouth
    if I slip, iswallow this mutha…… and die
    Lord why
    do my mama cry
    I try to survive
    it ain’t no lie
    what coincide with my pride
    won’t let me lie
    sleep at night when we struggling
    so I hit the block, huggin it like a bear
    str8 hustling

    90% grindin 10% sleep
    where do my friends creep, now I peep the game
    ****** tring to figure me weak
    trying to be a soldier
    on these war grounds
    bush can’t save
    mama look what they did to your baby
    i’m crazy
    suicidal is my mind
    everyday trying to put it down
    as
    ****** as it sounds

    one time
    4 my mind
    trying to find
    the spine
    that aligns
    with many minds
    this ain’t columbine
    this is the schools where sun don’t shine
    and chalk lines
    are the steps girls number and play times
    the jacks where jackers took mine

    many men don’t understand
    me………………
    2 be continued……..
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one does understand, little brother, cuz I've walked that winding road before, but I was lucky enough 2 be 1 that began travelling down that road less travelled, & my life is a lot easier.

    Many times I've thought about returning cuz the cheddar's so much better, but that isn't how I want my princess 2 see me.


    I hope U find the real U soon, brother, cuz we need our soldiers present & accounted 4, 4 when the real war jumps off.

    Peace be upon U.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i been on this road too many times i feel every line pose'd
    flow on let it out
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is just a phenomenal drop, spokesman. mad props for this
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so glad your still home with us my brotha :grouphug:
    all perspectives need to be viewed to heal our people :)
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    likes it
    Angel
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It sounds like you're bringing us to the battlefield...you posed this so well.
     
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