Black Poetry : As I walk through this dream

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I walk through this dream
    Memories of the past
    Makes the future stronger
    Brighter then the sun
    Losing control in my thoughts
    Never been a fool for love
    For I know love will find away
    To reach out to me
    If it’s meant to be
    Because I want a full time not a part time man
    Love me when I am wrong just as I am right
    Don’t fight during the day
    Then want to roll all night
    It’s not my cup of tea
    For love will find away
    To bring my hearts mate

    As I walk through this dream
    Looking in the sky
    Pearly vision of this man
    Dream lover…hearts desires
    My deep Mocha lover honey hush
    Strong and tall….and all mine
    The creamy part of my gleaming star
    For cupid visit me and brought you
    Knocking on my hearts door….

    HELLO…….

    Earth sounding off as we step that step
    Dancing under the cherry moon
    Stronger together then apart…
    Turning everything upside down
    Twisting...as we walk this dream
    In a hush….he is all mine
    Smooth dreamy profound lover
    Nature made you just for me
    As I walk through this dream
    Loving you through and through
    This love is our power
    As my dark turns to light
    Different in every way
    But love pulls us together
    No role reverse…
    As I am there for you
    And you for me…. for you’re the one
    Who stole my heart…

    As I walk through this dream
    Upon the moon light over the waves
    :spinstar: Stars beam :spinstar:
    Our worlds took on paradise
    When they became one
    The simple pleasure you bring

    Through this dream
    As I walk through this dream

    :heart: :spinstar: :heart:

    (C) 2004
    Poetry byan Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a beautiful expression of a love that was heaven sent.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here took me into a heart of harps where love
    cascade outward wit compassion what a walking dream
    dis be love the creativity sista Angel
     
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    Your man gets well paid!

    Nice j.o.b. keep sending 'em
     
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    Andreattah Active Member MEMBER

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    Geez...this totally blew me out!
    I got caught up in this piece..i got sad when it got to end.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    Good Lawd, woman...you express your love for The One so eloquently.

    Your poetry makes someone want to fall in love.

    :thanks: for sharing your inspiring words with us.

    :toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname...yes indeed heaven sent..thanks for the love and letting me know you enjoyed it!!! :)

    $$RICH$$..a peaceful flow within side ones dream of reality..so happy you enjoyed it...blushing... :blush: thankyou for the love and support on all my work..... :heart:

    1poetsought..thank you!!!!! :spinstar:

    Andreattah...happy you enjoyed the scribe.....never sad the end is only the beginning....:wink: for a new work will begin every time.....thanks for the love

    Monetary...oh see now ya got me blushing..thank you for the loving support money!!!!! :spinstar:
     
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