Quiet Poetry Lounge : As I wait

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Nov 10, 2004.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I wait for you
    I try to keep myself buzy by writing or reading
    I miss you so much it's been a year Since I made love to you

    As I wait for you
    to come home I'm doing what a woman suppose to do
    take care of the kids and keeping myself for you

    Nobody think I'm actually waiting
    for you I am because thing I use to do
    I don't need to do that anymore
    I got you all over me

    As I wait for you
    believe me its getting sweeter by the second
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to thy love one so waits soon he comes
    i know this feeling so well nice memory walk
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this reminds me of a story i heard of this woman who waited for her husband for decades. it was sad, she never saw him at the end of it all... anyway, back to the poem, very well written, mysterious, like that. props on your side!
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes thank you but to find as i was waiting he was screwing someone else well that how life goes sometime :happens:
     
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    I can deeply respect this piece. Fukk what your significant other was doing. You as a woman. better yet a "good" woman was doing what you need to. And he will see that in the end. But in the meantime always do just you. Much respect hon on the vibe...
     
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    Surely, it wasn't a years waste, not to mention that for a year, you've been "Aids free" ...but ...ummm...
    can he say the same? ...
    count your blessings, it should be about..."365" of um...
    It's his lost...your gain.
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I do again but the sad note was I now have a child he never seem but i'm not worry why because me as a strong black woman enuff said.
     
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    sometime love is blind and cross roads we never knew of
    but no need to worry for one head up high can make anything
    be.
     
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