Black Poetry : As I Pen This Piece ...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by garlicsalt99, Dec 14, 2007.

  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I pen this piece
    I release
    The essence of my mind for my thoughts, they don't cease
    As I think about the expression on your face
    I pace
    As thoughts rise like the sun in the east

    With the ink of my pen I stain
    And not refrain
    From the writinings that for me is unrestrained
    Because I know that somewhere in space
    You will embrace
    My pen as a child does a candy cane

    The ink from my pen is the evidence that I ejaculate
    Masturbate
    With the depth with which no one else can equate
    As it spills on the page
    with a rage
    And a passion that for others, it's hard to simulate

    So as I pen this piece
    I release
    As I expound on my mental increase
    As I plot
    To enter your comely spots
    With the energy of a wild beast

    Written by: K-JiO
    (c) 2007
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :em2700: smh......
    This was a Hard write Garlicsalt.....
    Really hard
    Keep the Flow!!!!!!!
    :10200:
     
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    my pen for me is also ecstasy...

    hell of an analogy tho....

    writing as an art for sure is orgasmic!

    multiples please..... poems that is :haha:

    I'm feelin ur style!
     
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    Great piece. I loved the flow and I felt your passion. Yes writing can be as Miss Lady says orgasmic. I can difinitely relate. Wonderful poem I enjoyed reading it.
     
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    Your pen has once again released it's ink, and quicker than a one eyed bandit...caused the reader to need a cool drink. Flowing can be like that, always great reading you poet.
     
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    sweet release and passionately written bruh
     
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    g-salt:
    YOUR pen is always HOTT
    like fiyah-drippn' with
    extreme passion and desire
    Your a poetic sire
    that I admire and can appreciate
    the thoughts you ejaculate and
    masturbate on your page of rage

    Nothn' but luv for ya....
     
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    Hi garlicsalt99
    Your scribe is awesome. I love how you
    express just what the ink of your pen brings.
    Yes indeed your writing is embracing.
    Keep that ink flowing.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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