Black Poetry : As I Enter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Feb 25, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I Enter

    Smooth waves take me inward
    I’m surrounded by your love
    The parting of your sea holds many wonders
    I’m touched by your spirit
    Feeling it flutter
    Like untried wings of newborn birds
    So sweet the spasm

    The entry continues
    Deeper into your life
    I make contact with your soul
    It is here I find you
    All of you
    But still I reach
    For the best of you

    Lying just beyond
    Sweet womanly doors
    I’ll knock in pleasing rhythm
    Knock until even you
    Cannot control what you will do
    I will knock and knock
    And knock again
    My entry complete
    When you allow me
    All the way in

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    peace....

    (excuse me while I reminisce)

    :heart:

    A
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i'm speechless ...
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart.....
    Smooth as it is baby.....just smooth
     
  5. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep...

    ..this is bad!

    make it plain~
     
  6. Bishop

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    Heartbeat I love the subliminal overtones...especially the line about "The parting of your sea holds many wonders"....Man you better handle yo business!!!!
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yeah....

    Bring it BE!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say dem wordz

    MR. Lover Lover bring da word luv to it's knees:heart: :)
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    a book filled with your love poetry would captivate hearts everywhere...

    I've think I've told you this before, and I'll say it again...you have a way of writing the words that every woman wants to hear..

    K
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    Oh how I love this vibe!!

    N2
     
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