Black Poetry : artist within.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Oct 7, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    My mama and daddy
    stood up to the powers that be
    when they made me.
    A nappy headed love child,
    running free
    through the vanquished valleys
    and abject alleys,
    spinning sorcery
    to orbit ideologies.

    Conceived through divinity's
    breath. The light of death
    manifest in flesh.
    Yes, I am the new day.
    When the rain has past
    the rainbow's cast
    my colors praise
    like a sun ray.

    Sky blue sings
    through echoes of yellows,
    the black bass blends
    with the treble of purple
    and I nod my head
    to the red.

    The beats broke
    and I bled oceans of potions
    which awoken the dead.
    Thought resurrected.
    The party's in the pyramid.
    And I'm on the floor
    in the uproar
    kickin' flows with pharos
    on some folklore
    my sounds swirl and sore
    color clusters from my core.

    For, I walk the seams
    between the seen and unseen
    hand in hand with my love supreme
    discussing the art of being.
    Words form while winds beat.
    Stepping with dove's feet
    over the flames of the deep.
    Making love to life's sorrows
    on beds of rose petals.
    An orgasm ordained with holly hallows.
    Never penetrated by folic symbols
    Your guns will never get the god

    I laugh at your fear of blackness

    As eyes shut
    the mind lights up.
    Ceresin dreams burn
    in the lords lantern.
    Sunshine divine
    darkness eternal
    there are colors
    you have never seen
    are painted in the pages
    of my journal.

    I've built my home
    in the eighth dimensional
    world of worlds
    where
    on minds porch
    I whittle riddles
    and carve consciousness,
    sketch charcoal souls
    on an endless canvas
    and live as art
    forever listening to the artist within.
    :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: :run: too :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:tha hookupman....
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thinking: Im with you bro, this was a very well versed piece, nice drop
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *From one Artist to Another...*

    Kisses on your ~Brilliance~

    Kisses on your ~Mind~

    Kisses for this piece

    ...Aimer que vous est si facile...

    :hearts1: Love Your Sage...:hearts1:

    ...I'll critique you later :coffee:


    000000000000000000000
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write poet of the week likes the flow
     
  5. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coooooooooooool, dude! I now have nothing else to say.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    running beside u on dis one tyte flow ......wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And that's why he's the POET of the WEEK!!!
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the only line i needed but the rest of the drop was off the chain also my brother! :toast:
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's much wisdom in your work poet, and if you keep dropping..I'll catch it all. tight piece...poet of the week.
     
  10. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speechless and stunned!!!!!!
    I overlooked this piece.
    I really don't know what to say then : "this was absolutely beautiful, poet".

    moham
     
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