Black Poetry : Artic Alicia

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Jul 13, 2001.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My pupils dilated and my nose opened
    the moment she walked into the room.
    Radar detected danger on the horizon
    only to be obliterated by tracking hormones,
    overriding clear thought and common sense.

    My voice rasped razors and resonated
    so loud over surrendered vocal chords,
    that I didn’t hear the whir of the compressor
    refrigerating her words and heart.

    My usual heat died, spent fuel rods
    leaking invisible radiation, frozen pipes.
    Exposed to her freezing fallout,
    I didn't feel her frigid blade until
    It slipped between my ribs
    as I laid her down.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YA POETIC THINKING

    IS A BLAST OF SMOOTH TYGHT FLOW!:toast:
    YA ON A ROLL
     
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    Ya flowing strong. nice

    BE
     
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    Ra....


    ...as always!

    your visuals are astounding!! ****! :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't turn it down

    I can't turn it down even if it kills me--Ra ;)
     
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  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blinded

    Sometimes as men we never see it coming because we are blinded by our hormones--Ra
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Ra

    you better start keeping protection a little closer from now on
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's Hard

    Hell--I guess that the problem--it's hard and away I go, never feeling any pain until that moment when reality steps in and slaps me upside the head--Ra
     
  10. Tyrone

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    Yeah!

    I'm feelin the images...been here. This is how it is...I'll read a thought-provoking piece like this. (and appreciate the message and the skill)..and go 'there' again. huh??

    Tight, Amun-Ra

    Ty
     
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