Black Poetry : Art of Muzik

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lil'MizzUnique, Jul 15, 2004.

  1. lil'MizzUnique

    lil'MizzUnique Active Member MEMBER

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    Art of Muzik

    My body is like a blank Canvas
    Pure and ready
    ready for your gentle brushes
    to paint a beautiful picture
    with smoothness and ease
    with every stroke
    this beautiful portrait
    that it is soon to be
    becomes more and more
    unique
    Different from others
    colors combined
    to go deep to the soul
    as every stroke
    of your brush
    becomes more intense then the last
    less astonishing as the next
    completely noticeable
    not for the eye
    only for the mind
    as my heart becomes
    the lines of music
    that the notes of your soul
    dance upon
    miraculously
    in the midnight hours
    and daytime minutes
    time goes by
    as your mind is lost in the
    abstract that once was made
    not out of sin and lust
    only love and trust
    although you don't understand the writing
    you can read between the lines
    and understand clearly
    what lies deep into my mind
    and my soul
    and my heart
    Words of purity
    fill my mentality
    not physically
    only emotionally
    as you sing another song
    on the lines of my heart
    paint another picture
    graciously upon the canvas of my body
    as we create a unity
    and life long balance
    brought by our polychromatic
    proximity
    that will continue to lie in our destiny
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is quite a poem, and I like the way you delivered it...welcome and thanks for sharing this piece with us.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribing love how u did this

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a creative piece here, flowing with all types of artistic images to create this work of art. Welcome to Destee's.
     
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    Very nice indeed!

    Keep on laying 'em!

    Tyte drop!
     
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    Every poem has that one line
    that just gets you...
    hook, line and sinker...
    this was an intoxicatingly beautiful peace...
    but this line just seem to bring it home for me...

    our polychromatic proximity *applause*
    I like that...
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooh I like this I thought I was in a club for a minute....lovin this piece it was so smooth....the colors were bright and just popped out at me lovin it do yo thang :jumping:
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi sista :wave: hadnt had the chance of sayin hello :) but this flow was a worthy intro to ya :) very vivid :) Loved the illustrated colors and theme :)