Black Poetry : Art of Card building

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Apr 5, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hobbie where do you go
    When ya leave one for another.
    Holding on
    Going on
    Forgetting on
    What is the project today?
    My newness but done before this
    Is there a way.
    To stretch
    To adapt
    To create
    How we already heard about that
    Is it yours all the way.
    Which part
    Intriguing part
    Copywrote part
    My personality reflects obsessive hobbies
    When it becomes mines to demonstrate.
    When can
    When does
    When is
    The minute long thought
    becomes
    A one & off switch of technically who I use to be.
    Made up
    Made in
    Made 2b
    Looked at and put back into
    The roundness & longatedness of what pulls.
    Unconnectedness out
    Fornicating out
    You out
    Into the quest of having my hobbie
    Become something we all can do individually adapting.
    Said
    Done
    Doing
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I enjoyed the whole; but these lines spoke to me the loudest.

    Yes, individually and collectively, we should all seek to expound and extrapolate to envision a step further and deeper.

    Nice piece....evoking introspection and instruction.
     
  3. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you enjoyed!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ve nice piece......message move with a flair...
     
  5. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya $$RICH$$ I was trying something new.
     
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