Black Poetry : Armaggedon

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  1. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Armageddon

    The sun…placed on the edge of sanity
    refused to shine
    the breathing light….
    on the faces of the living
    and so began the end of a calm storm
    now turning enraged by the stillness
    of the life and the land….

    This deep embodiment of misunderstanding
    for what was present yet shouldn’t have been
    became a sea of tears,
    drenched by the thickness of a pain
    which destroys a soul

    Yet in the silence of eternity
    It has connected each to the souls of the universe
    Destroying the very being of the world
    Perverting the existence of what should be perfection
    and replacing it with a plague of confusion….

    Death…the only sure thing to a sufferers end
    is now the same as an unanswered question
    Just as hope transformed into a spindle of nothing
    In the reflection of our mistakes

    Here life stands at the edge of it’s mountain
    Looking at the outskirts of disaster…
    Doing nothing
    But awaiting
    A sun
    that will never again shine….​

    copywritten 2005 by Rashawna Wilson, aka prizefighter16, aka MzSoulll :cool:
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this flow poet..
    Flow on....
     
  3. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks sis... I appreciate the love

    Word from

    Mz.Soulll :cool:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was painted to perfection
    awesome flow Prize.............
     
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    Diggin' yo' flow poet!
     
  6. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich thanks brutha, lol, im glad it was awesome

    Scrybble thanks for diggin the flow, and nice to meet u as well


    Keep the flow goin

    Word from MzSoulll
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice deep flow on this
    Delivery right on que
    Much Love Poet
    Keep doing your thang
     
  8. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love tantrum...keep the flow goin


    MzSoulll :cool:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was something keep them flows coming.
     
  10. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah it was something to share...thanks for taking time to read it...


    Keep the flow goin as well

    MzSoulll :cool: