Quiet Poetry Lounge : ARISE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by godsmantru, Apr 13, 2008.

  1. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 28, 2008
    Messages:
    227
    Likes Received:
    2
    Ratings:
    +2
    Arise our God
    and your enimies scatter
    send forth your love and
    the things that do matter
    the things that exist
    on the Heavenly plain
    Manifest your Children
    and to them it is gain:
    with HEALING in your wings
    you did RISE
    to make known to the wise:

    A rose,the symbol he chose, he knows,
    nothing so sweet when we worship at his feet:
    AROSE.
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2005
    Messages:
    2,088
    Likes Received:
    38
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Full Time Student and Independant Buisness Owner
    Location:
    Life is waiting....
    Ratings:
    +38
    The Rose Word Play was nice I liked that. The was a great Post GODSMANTRU and a wonderful choice for your first poem:)
    Yes Arise, We are Waiting:)
     
  3. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 28, 2008
    Messages:
    227
    Likes Received:
    2
    Ratings:
    +2
    Thank you for your words they are Birds:
    Doves from above they bring LOVE.
    The words of that Rhyme, came to me just in time:
    RENEWING the strength of my mind.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Such an uplifitng message, I enjoyed your words godsmantru.
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - ARISE
  1. Alarm Clock
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    329
  2. Joyce
    Replies:
    9
    Views:
    614
  3. MyTlita
    Replies:
    6
    Views:
    541