Black Poetry : Are you ....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are you that man?
    The one…are you
    The one that was sent from above
    One who wishes to share his love?
    ….with me
    Are you the one?
    Who will be my infinity?
    My light my gift from above
    Are you the man?
    That will wipe my tears
    And hold my fears?
    Rain or shine
    Are you the one?
    That will cherish me?
    Handle with tender care?
    Let me be a woman?
    Won’t stop me from growing?
    Are you the one?
    Am I want you looking for or
    …..Just time to spend?
    I may not be what you think you need
    See, I got needs I have desires
    I have dreams to reach
    Will you take that search
    ……….With me?
    Deal with my emotions?
    Complete me in my soul form?
    Hold me close at night?
    And during the day?
    Are you the one?
    Carry me when I can’t carry myself?
    Find me when I am lost?
    And love me for me?
    Are you the one?
    Will you say
    …………. I do?
    and hold that bond?

    See for me, I don’t want a chapter
    I want a book…
    Pages of us written
    Shaped from our love
    And copy written no duplications
    That one of a kind love thang
    A love that came out the blue
    Are you the one?


    (C) 2005
    untitled life
    new vision
     
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    very sweet piece sis...heartfelt
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the one who step to this surely the one
    when he knock let him in ! this was so felt and deeply expressed
     
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    peace,

    YES, I am that 1..................beautiful indeed sista!

    peace
     
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    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    You really hit this one right on the target. The expression was so real, I'm still lovin it! Great job sister....keep em comin. :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and support... Happy you all enjoyed the scribe...Angel
     
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    tru dat most welcome & thank u for sharing sis.....