Black Poetry : Are You Scared...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 19, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are you scared of me
    And the way I make you feel
    Am I too good to be real
    Or at least that's how you feel
    Are you scared of the feelings
    That you have for me
    Do you feel it's to soon or to early
    To actually be in love with me?
    Are you afaid that i will crush you
    And take advantage of the sensitive side of you
    Are you scared that the words I say aren't TRUE
    And in the end I will just up and leave you
    Are you scared I won't give all of me
    Instead just give you parts of me
    That you're love won't be returned fully
    Are you just to blind to see
    That I love you more than you even know
    My only dream right now is to have this love grow
    Let our hearts bond together and flow
    You need to let all your doubts go
    And let me love you
    Be the one for you
    And hold you
    You need to understand how much I love you.
     
  2. MORE

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    ooooo, i feeeel this one for real, i have felt this way, i feel this way now, this was right on time.:jumping: :jumping:
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you MORE...i'm feeling this way right now too and I needed to express it some how. thank you for feeling my work.
     
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    Girl, you are right on point with this one - direct hit! You've spoken for so many. Wonderful flow.
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much gempis...i just let go what was in my heart and i'm glad you all are feeling it.
     
  6. Khasm13

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    this was tyte...
    scurred lil boys need to peep...
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL thank you khasm...i appreciate you reading this.
     
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    TRUE!!TRUE!!!
    SOOO FEEL THIS WAY MAMITA....
    LET 'UM HAVE IT......
    CAUSE EVERYBODY DONE FELT LIKE THIS AT ONE POINT OR ANOTHER.....WHETHER YOU WERE ON THA GIVIN' OR RECEIVIN' SIDE.......
    I'M LOVIN' THIS HERE...THANX FOR THA READ.......
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lurk....thank you thank you thank you... your kind words were greatly appreciated. and yeah, i'm never gonna stop feeling this way about him...if he believes it or not!
     
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    gurl...see thas why I know we folks cause I often wonder myself :)
    I am LOVIN your poetic existence my sista :)
     
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