Black Poetry : are you really ready?

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hush,
    sit back and get ready for a mind rush.
    A lyrically sublime flush of the lust you been holdin’
    wide open,
    strokin’ your mental passageways
    with simple accolades to moisten up your satin shades,
    so pull em back
    there’s no need to counteract,
    cause that pink fluorescent cat,
    is blinding my cataracts.
    So matter fact, just settle back and straddle that,
    if I wasn’t being clear, I’m talkin’ bout my thinking cap.
    I’m thinking that, I can make your body act,
    as if it was convulsing from the way my tongue attacks.
    Girl relax,
    I’m just speakin’ freakin’ facts,
    and the way that I be freakin’, you’re sure to have a leakin’ lapse.
    involuntary haps,
    haphazardly collapse,
    and as the sugarwalls fall, I’m cleaning up the fruity sap.
    Doing my duty so exact, it has to be meticulous
    cause if your boy is on the job, then you know it’s serious.
    There’s no need for us to rush,
    let the passion set the pace,
    cause it’s much more glorious, when we both finish the race.
    So be easy with the haste, cause perfection comes with time,
    let me make love to your mind, then maybe I can show you mine.
    . . .
    You better pull your skirt back up, cause I just got in ya head,
    imagine what I’d do if I ever got ya in my bed.


    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strategically creatively seducing the mind. Well written spicy drop poet. Nice to read something from ya again.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i likes i likes seduce a sister why dont you..nice vibe....Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, step in my "Head" ...and know me complete
    before any thought of us, inticing the sheets

    Take my mind, to it's highest peak...
    and that turns, the rest of my body weak

    You can use that tongue...to massage my spirits
    and none other, can ever come close, to get near it

    So the Skirt, wise one, is just the cover to my heart
    and once inside...you will never depart​

    Awesome piece poet, thanks for allowing me to share it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice piece question remain are u ready !
    speak on
     
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    Ready or not this joint was HOT!!!
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you are one of the names when i see it
    i rush to read it...
    and this one...
    this one...is lush
    and fine and rhymin all the time
    another layer from your thread
    another layer of your head..
    and since so much of lush is
    between the ears
    good lord in bed..
    one just might get filled with tears..

    a joy to read you...so much talent oozing..
     
  8. robryant1106

    robryant1106 Active Member MEMBER

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    :darts: As usual, tzevi1278, this is a hot scribe. :spin:
     
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