Black Poetry : Are You Coming with M.E.?

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  1. truetothecause

    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSsssssssss

    Can you feel the passion growing?
    ummmmmmmmmmmmmm
    The Birthing of a Nation is showing

    AHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    My SENSE~si~~tive places are rising
    In the heat of desire, My Spirit is crying
    For you

    Will you come with M.E.?

    I’m ready to give birth
    For its time to cleanse the Earth
    With this sweet warm flow
    I’m RAW!
    Ready, Willing and Able….. to let it all go

    OHHHHHHhhhhhhhh……sssssssssss

    Touch me right there
    My energy needs your care
    And attention…..UH!
    It’s ready to release
    All this pent up tension

    Please come with M.E.

    Do what only you can do
    Come…Aid M.E.
    In the RE~birthing of YOU

    Come taste my nascent juices
    God dammit~ no more excuses
    My Love is Real, its Righteous and True
    My Honey is the glue
    Forever binding M.E. to YOU

    Ahhhhhhhhh…..

    Will you come with M.E.?


    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    I can’t hold it back much longer
    This fiyah is growing Stronger and stronger

    Come baby Come
    Come with M.E. and see
    Witness the birthing of our Unity

    Ummmmmm Commmmm~ing together, to end this soliloquy

    OH MY GOD!!!
    Can't turn back now
    It's in our coming together that our livity is bound
    Where Love is found
    And Happiness RE~sounds

    Come....let's go

    AHHHHHHHhhhhh…the RE~birthing of Mama Earth
    OHHHHHHhhhhhhh….the RE~storing of our Worth
    UMMMMMmmmmm….The RE~claiming of our Naaaaaaa~tion
    Ahhhhhhhhhh..

    the final step
    …sssssss ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah
    RE~~PA~~TRI~~AAAAAAAAAATIOOOOONNNNNNNNNN!!!!!


    Are you Coming with M.E.?​
    :SuN040: :qqb006:


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  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the time is finally here

    yes sista i (we) are ready

    ready to make this step

    to becoming more divine citizens

    back to the real and not the surreal
     
  3. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Of course I'm coming!!!

    You ain't gotta ask me but once.
    I mean,how long must I see
    the same repetitive nonsense
    over and over......
    So I feel you on this..
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And our coming together should be just as joyous and exciting as your scribe implies. Diggin your vibe and the way this piece was posed.
     
  5. Goddess Auset333

    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    Beloved Qg WAtzinaname writes: And our coming together should be just as joyous and exciting as your scribe implies. Diggin your vibe and the way this piece was posed.

    I agree
    :SuN030: :SuN030: :SuN030:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Uniting our Unity as we commmmmmmmme together as one whole
    yesssssssssss ahhhhhhhh!!! allow me to come wit cha ................
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will certainly :bowdown: to this piece. I'm on the same train with ya.
    Great piece poet!!
     
  8. truetothecause

    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the listening and the feedback!

    It does a/my Soul Good:smooch:
     
  9. Goddess Auset333

    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    Beloved Qg TTTC:

    Can you feel the passion growing?
    ummmmmmmmmmmmmm
    The Birthing of a Nation is showing
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    :qqb018: :qqb018: :qqb018:
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    yes but i don't see my ticket!

    lol

    yes yes sista brethren

    i love your fire

    your love

    for us

    it is a pleasure to watch
     
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