Black Poetry : Are u ready?

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  1. Olatunba

    Olatunba New Member MEMBER

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    Are u ready to nolonger mourn,
    to be nurtured like roses among thorns
    to shine like the vibrating sun above
    surrounded by an abundance of love?

    Are u ready to be raped of ur fears,
    to be kissed by an early dawn summer dew,
    to have a savior save u from the tears
    sadly drowning the best that's in u?

    Are u ready to be set free to rise,
    have the fire placed back inside ur eyes,
    are u ready to receive love unconditionally
    that'll warm ur soul like a good cup of tea?

    Are u ready for me?

    Are u ready to be set free from the pain,
    and have ur lips showered with kisses like rain,
    are u ready to have ur core healed by hands
    that will transmit light upon ur command?

    Are u ready for someone to listen to u,
    protect u, cherish u and ease ur mind,
    be there for everything life will take u through,
    when the world is being so unkind?

    Are u ready for a man that will relate,
    and respond to u like a true soul mate,
    are u ready to be embraced by grace
    and have a smile laced on ur lovely face?

    Are u ready for me?

    Are u ready for a love that's sure
    to be organic, sweet, addictive and pure,
    are u ready to be protected from harm,
    by strong, comforting and safe Godly arms?

    Are u ready for a true black warrior man,
    one who loves to write about art,
    and speaking from the depths of his heart?
    if so, then miss lady, u are ready for me.


    Olatunba Olufemi
    (c)2003 taken from "The Spinning of Yarns Collection" Volume One
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh...Myyyyyyyyyyyy

    This made my spirit SOAR...this piece is absolutely wonderful...
    What woman isn't ready for this...
    As if you need to ask..., that line about transmistting light upon command
    was just awesome and so soul stirring...

    Beautiful Invitation to Love...

    Thanks for Sharing such Beauty with us...This was so uplifting...
    and so masterfully written.

    Encore :spinstar:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Who wouldn't be ready for this? And if someone is not, they need to get ready. This was a wonderful, quite powerful poem scribing about a strong confident man. This was a great read.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome
    to the house of love & peace
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    happy to feel the vibe of ya powerful pen
     
  5. innerbeauty

    innerbeauty Member MEMBER

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    Yes I'm ready... You've got talent, I felt this poem in my soul.. :spinn:
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olatunba,
    Very beautifully rendered.....
    Your poem sings....

    Peace and Blessings
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, ...welcome here
    I'm feeling this piece,it's nice and on time. thanks for sharing it.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave:Olatunba
    welcome to our community
    very lovely poem
    it flows so smooth
    thank you for sharing
    looking forward to feeling more
    of your flows
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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