Black Poetry : archieved piece...still untitled

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    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i awaken from rapturous dreams of you....
    ..eagerly anticipating..your face to view~
    hoping that the smiles seen....
    ..or the sighs heard..weren't just in my slumber~
    or viewed only through my 3rd eye....
    ..praying..that this is not just a lure~
    your coquettishly/cascading verses..so emotionally pure....
    ..so glad that i could be of service to you~
    armed..with knowledge that I assisted YOU....
    ..in overreaching your ecstatic expectations~
    has a way of making me happy...too!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now

    u awaken to a unknown bliss
    that pose a beauty within it self
    and cast a motion to da mental
    as i say wow! tyght flow .......:D
     
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    $RICH$ ONE.....

    THANX FOR THE READ...[TOO BAD THE PERSON THIS WAS PENNED
    FOR CAN'T/DOESN'T/WON'T EVER FEEL IT LIKE THAT! SHE'S
    NOT PFEALIN' ME UP....HA! HA! HA! BUT THEN AGIN...ISN'T THAT HOW YOU DESCRIBE EX-FRIENDS!!!!] I WAS IN SUCH A MELANCHOLY MOOD WHEN I WROTE THIS..AND EVERYBODY THAT HAS EVER HEARD ME READ IT SAYS HOW "UPBEAT" IT IS!
    WEIRD HUH!!??
     
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    man !

    u see da vibe i got from it most def upbeat
    even if it's a pop in ya back u pose a flow
    that reach da mind and make a brutha wonder
    but yeah! it's like dat sometime when one can't
    feel what's inside .....i bet dis lit da house up!:eek:
     
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