Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Apr 23, 2004.
feelin this one
thanks for sharing
Very nice piece....
Yes, you shall make it. We've all been there.
for sharing a part of you with us.
very smooth piece,
beautiful sage...gots love for this piece...
feeling the drops of april rain caressing me
this was beautiful sistah
Many don't overstand that the cold winter snows get washed away by the spring rains that bring the summer flowers, but, sister, U get it.
Summer's not far, just keep your umbrella close by.
Very nice piece.
All your pieces bring pretty pictures to the mind. But in this one you also laced in a sad note that you have to sing for now, but you won't have to hold it forever. Looking forward to your summer, it may get here sooner than you think. Much luv to ya.
Oh my!! Sister, I wish I could convey how you've made my heart swell with this beautiful piece. Oh my goodness. I do know what you mean. Am in a massive period of cultivating my own growth right now. Probably won't recognize myself by year's end. As always, I so feel you, and as always, you have laid out the most amazing lines. Much love, poet and friend.
very nicely posed and presented; such melodic melancholy write; hope also shines through....an enjoyable read....
Peace and Blessings
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