Black Poetry : APPRECIATED

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sometime side tracks comes
    love is deep surely to run
    your worth is so appreciated
    that it makes me wonder & waits
    think of what we could make

    We both like deep breeze
    ya soft and something to squeeze
    me just one to please
    yet avoiding from da vision
    still in my heart ur my choice
    from ya beauty to ya moody way
    even how we mend and play

    Ya so appreicted in my eye
    ya my flower my soul suprise
    together we like da moon dat rise
    and set like da sun to mesmerize
    side track trying to subside
    da love i feel deep inside
    sorry to say but your so appreciated
    not only to me but to everyone u see

    But i choose u to be my mate
    and i will continue to forever wait
    now my loveth never forget
    ya not unappreciated but appreciated
    by fate
    thy eyez art watching u ......:look:
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's was beautiful Rich, wasn't even about me and i feel appreciated.
     
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    choclatangel ..
    surely through every maze of life ya worth is appreciated
    as your words say it all and your heart love is felt thank u
    so kindly dear.
     
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    That very one whom seem forgotten and unappreciated is Appreciated
    dearly and deeply and alwayz hold a place so dear ..............................
     
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    Good deeds and heartfelt warmth sometimes do go unappreciated by others, even those who should appreciate you the most. But one only has to remember one's own worth to get things back on track again. Yet another lovely vibe from you.
     
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    well, well, well wonder who the inspiration behind this my king. could it be you found that diamond in the rough. enjoyed the write touched me truly. keep on inspiring my love.:welldone:
     
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    watz....... U are so right often one go un-notice and appreciated
    but if one has such heart and love surely appreciation will be as
    i do i give high praise to thee u know i appreciated . Thankz sis.

    Nevar......surely u know and to sho that appreciation is caressed
    dearly in my heart as i extend thy hand indeed a true diamond
    sparkling in gleam thank u honey child
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw cant say that i know whom it is. but i do know this you are truly wonderful. keep the heart true never let it turn blue. as we all keep continue to be Appreciated!!!!!!!:ilu:
     
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    i liked this joint it was deep but lite all in one good stuff
     
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    This was good for some reason it made me think about that congo movie on that last part ,"Thy eyez are watching you." I think in congo it was "we are watching you" or something like that, but nice work man
     
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