Black Poetry : Apple of my eye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 9, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    She like da radiant sun glow
    bath in a morning cluster
    she is da deep brown caramel
    wit da light soft silky hair
    cascading in da wind sweep
    she is my apple my heart
    in da evening burst of a
    blossome flower da sparkle
    in her eyes mesmerise my soul
    da depth she pose is in her
    visional journey of new light
    Da apple of my eye
    to touch is comfort
    to feel is caressed
    to taste is fulfilling
    so softly i whisper her name
    she hear me in her sleep
    awaken to my beckon call
    she da apple of my eye
    her name is beauty
    black beauty goddess
    my Queen she know who she be
    and the true love of me
    i'm just a peach but she da apple
    of my days ahead my beloveth
    :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart:
     
  2. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 13, 2004
    Messages:
    277
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    PA
    Ratings:
    +9
    tyte flow man!! Keep doin ya thing!!! U really got me with this one!!! :read: :wave:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    very nice..apple of your eye seems Richie Rich in love :love: ...QQ
    loving this vibe of waves right here....

    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 26, 2004
    Messages:
    279
    Likes Received:
    9
    Ratings:
    +9
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! this is just a precious piece. Somebody is truly loved and in love. Great expression feelin this.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,322
    Likes Received:
    38
    Location:
    ~The hidden library...~
    Ratings:
    +39
    this was sweet...
    as always...

    Much love,
    Sage
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    thankz Blatinapoet4u i do have a twist side flow at times

    thankz Angel seem that way don't it

    thankz Ireadastory ya far too sweet & kind

    thankz sage u know me

    y'all too sweet and kind here wuv u all
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    The apple of your eye, just enough sugar to make this sweet. This was lovely Rich.
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    thank u so much watz indeed very tasty
     
Loading...