Black Poetry : apparitions

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  1. strmgam

    strmgam Member MEMBER

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    I loved him 'cause he wrote the words to the lines to the songs that drew me from one page to the next... then he crossed it.

    Poet in word alone.

    Beautiful in everything he pretended to be.
    Hands like chocolate whirlwinds, much too strong to be denied.
    Couldn't resist though I tried.
    He went on a rampage, my mind tossed to and fro without even realizing. And I was caught up in the aftermath.
    'Cause he had lips made especially for pillow talk.
    And eyes worth the dive.
    Every moment I was with him my hands could meet no borders,
    my tongue found desolate spaces to call home, and there I roamed,
    foreva seems like.
    I felt fantasy bleed into reality and taboo was no longer an issue.
    I felt like he visited every corner of me... my body, mind, soul and spirit.

    I became his lady for that night at least.

    :wine:
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definitely feeling this one here! Nice poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new house u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    tyte drop u flow look to read u some mo!
    welcome :skate: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    share love as love is given welcome to the family
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry can be that way, taking the mind away on a journey of wonderful words. And this was a wonderful piece. Welcome to destee, hope you enjoy!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What an entrance! Great piece, girl - welcome to Destee! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME... here comes another fine talent.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i must say...

    this here is the best thing ive read since man i dont even know. this is really really good poet. god bless.
     
  8. strmgam

    strmgam Member MEMBER

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    One of the best ? That's the craziest thing I've ever heard... in a good way. Thanx. Peace.
     
  9. strmgam

    strmgam Member MEMBER

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    Sorry took so long to respond to the beautiful welcomes :thanks: . 1 luv.
     
  10. Khasm13

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    tyte joint poet...and welcome
    da one night thunders always makes u wonder....
    keep scribe'n....
    one love
    khasm