Black Poetry : APHRODISIAC

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  1. Poeticvibez

    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    Behind the setting of fluorescent pinks and orange yellow reds
    signifying the dying of the day
    I connected with my heart so our souls could play
    She the diamond I the finger
    bring silk cloths to cause jewels to shine
    The wind movement passive
    Almost as if it didn't have the strength to disturb trees
    Best believe the perfect picture moment lingering in the background
    plus a pair of brown diamonds challenging me
    who would i be to back down
    Animals of the night arrive so we can have a melody to our symphony
    Miss lady who resembles a brown and light brown chocolate mix
    began painting initializing brush strokes with a kiss
    So i retaliate with eyes locked as well as lips and hands on hips and middle finger stroking thighs
    (umphh)
    Smells like shorty
    Im in the mood of mocha chocolate cinnamon you
    With a lions grace i watch my prey as i await a taste
    As I attack Ms. Lady shivers 2 centimeters from her ears where I deliver words to make her quiver
    Ushering in moments that are magical
    I start with a kiss on her clavicle
    one that i hope would cause a ripple that i can catch with my lips as i graze her nipples in a circular direction to the left with my tounge
    your body has my attention
    I love the you my extension
    My two team 5 finger crew explores the land that is you
    Deep breaths your taking
    princess why are you shaking
    Let me soothe your fears its love we’re making
    gentle trails of liquid means my fingers are seasick
    i love the you my extension I mean it
    And as my lips meet your ocean you make a fist while your moaning
    to make love for eternity
    stars hovering above candle lights
    repeating your name without using words
    love making that has us looking through the eyes of birds
    And as we make love in a bed of pearls
    Something penetrates your waters and straightens your natural curls
    Back to earth from which we came
    I wouldn't be comfortable with you screaming my name
    so i indulge in your peaches
    prefer your sweat dripping you breathless and speechless
    The picture almost done from stroke after stroke
    i look up around me the world a silent black
    My hands move to grip the same spot yours grips on my back
    The waves start t crash violently you explode silently with misunderstood words you remind me
    That you are my chosen path
    My Aphrodisiac
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: Woooooooo weee that poem was hotter and stronger than my cup of coffee..NICE NICE SCRIBE
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com

    Thanks for sharing this piece its hot. :hot:
     
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    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    THANX

    THANX FOR THE LUV. IM LIKIN THE VIBE HERE.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was extremely awesome and red hot like chilly
    lovin the scribe u bring swing on !
     
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    Wow...this was lush with passion and spice poet, the kind of scribe you need to take your time with, so you won't miss a syllable. Flow on.
     
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    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    This peice is my baby my first spokenword peice and yeah its meant to go down smooth
     
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    HI Poeticvibez
    swoosh
    yeah this poem flowed smooth
    wow
    Welcome to the family
    digging your flow

    Peace
     
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    This is beautiful
     
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