Black Short Stories : APARTMENT 244B (pt.III)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    After two weeks Christine was free and had left a stain of tears, her life
    was falling apart as she return to work, how please'd A.W was to see her
    but what really was troubling her is the facts who post the money for her
    bail talking with her boss she left for home.
    Thomas sitting lonely awaiting her after Dan had left the apartment
    she enter he jump embracing her emotionally happy softly speaking in a
    smooth tone "honey" i know i was wrong i can't even start to express what
    really took place and why but i know i love you and care to his knees looking
    at Christine, she turn half away holding his hand not to look him in the eyes
    we both had our faults what was a one night stand became more but , as
    Thomas rise slowly near blue in the face , why ! he asked baby she cried
    out it was in the heat of a moment and acts of passion i always loved you
    i never did anyone harm or wanted to hurt you but life had became very
    shhhhh! he replyed let it be behind us it's been so lonely without you.
    Soon a tap at the door, don't amswer, please! don't answer Thomas said
    she did and steped out side on her return , who was it and what did they
    want she looked at him in tears , so you had a child on the way a baby !
    how could you Thomas froze o' my God who told you that ! it was a
    mistake i promise it was i was going to tell you the rest , Thomas the half
    truth is like a small lie i'm leaving going to my Mother's for a while slammin
    the door he rush to the phone calling Dan right away he told it was that
    guy name Bob that works in the building , Tony came back to collect his
    things but willie was waiting for him just before he could get him Big Jack
    pulled up Willie took off running Tony saw it and he jumped and ran too
    he was headed to chicago to start over again not aware he's wanted for
    murder but really didn't do it , three days later Thomas and Christine was
    at the apartment talking it all out and she had just quiet her job she said
    let's move from here all this place do is bring bad memories and sour tears
    yes but where will we go , she smiled to another state just use your
    imaginary thinking , After 6 months and the case was still open the police
    notice some very weird movement and hear that they was moving away to
    D.C and out the blue A.W.Kemit shows up asking Christine to see him for
    a business deal before she leave, police was racing around the clock to
    solve this case with new clues and findings the finger was pointing at some
    folks and now we finally have a lead to clear her name and trap this killer.
    We now know who did it and why !
    quickly picking up every subspect running them in late that night the phone
    ring to was Dan calling to tell Thomas about the bust at 4th and Main and
    a raid at the stock exchange soon the police knock asking can they come
    downtown for a few hours , Thomas said can it wait until morning it's 9 PM
    sorry you two have to come with us tonight they had picked up Willie , Tony
    Dan and christine, from the stories we heard tonight you all can now go
    after pulling the records and found key witnesses to the case but who was
    these two witnesses that was a mystery.

    As the law crack it wide open the killer is caught and key witnesses revealed
    stay tune to the final chapter of Apartment 244B ..
    $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You continue to bring the intrigue. So many wanted to see her dead. So, who done it, and why? I'll be sure to stay tuned.
     
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    you know watz.....i notice the reasons and why but who is the question
    now that Christine is released and it's not tony but i have a feeling Dan
    knows more then he say , but who knows i bet inside that apartment lay
    answers ......Thankz sistah
     
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    oh this is good...glad Christine is released
    i dont think she done it....anyway
    i cant wait for the next part..
    on the edge of my seat ....
    great story Rich
     
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    thankz sistah , i wonder if Dan paid that guy to do it but have anybody
    even thought about Big Jack one who can get away clean ....hummm!!!
    the muder mystery continues at Apartment 244B
     
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    Dang, this is fire. I'm truly feelin' this. Man, this Christine character is something else. I can't wait for that final chapter. I want to know the end.
     
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    thanks foxi it's coming soon and what a shocker it will be
     
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    tyme to put a closure to it's drama as Apartment 244B continues
     
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    rich you keep us waiting. cant wait for the final chapter. funny how one small thing changes EVERYTHING. some people have to learn the hard way unfortunately.again, this has been a tyte story from the start
     
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    Thank you as i bring it to a close ......stay tune for the who when and why mystery at 244B
     
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