Black People : APARTMENT 244B Pt.II chapter I

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who shot Rhonda? solve the mystery!

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  4. Maryann

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  5. Dan

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  6. was it someone else and who?

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :new: One so dat love & hate is one whom confused (Quote)

    Eyes sparkling and her mouth twisted to a smile she knew it was time
    to act on what seem to be trouble,a conflict between Thomas and Rhonda
    after a few calls and the move, Thomas heart was broken but, his feelings
    was still on her after six months passby !
    Dan and kathy was over to the house carefully speaking trying to help
    patch up the drama and all the lies that has torn a beautiful relationship
    a marriage and friends,later that day Thomas call her office leaving a
    message to return his call, he wonder if she was really pregnant with child
    after six months he should be able to know, Returning his call about 7 PM
    that night "Hello" Thomas how are you! Rhonda i'm doing well how is the
    baby; (for a minute she forgot) what do you mean , what baby?
    you are pregnant right? O' yes love you mean that well like before i plan
    to have an abortion soon listen can we meet i need another two thousand,
    excuse me ! I don't have that kind of money tonight, Thomas just get it
    ask that darn wife of yours she got it but all i know is you better have it or
    i will tell her the truth, are you blackmaling me woman , No just telling facts
    but I need you know that Thomas, what about Willie ! Don't worry he going
    back to jail my friend Big Jack will handle that beside i don't love him anymore
    Rhonda pleaseeee! stop it now, this have to stop! I love my wife dearly
    and i can't nolonger do this game you have betrayed me , cost me and killing
    me and my dreams time to finally get you, I will not come nor will i pay one
    red dime but if you say one word your dead! as he slam))) the phone down
    in anger, Christine was out of town on bussiness in New York and then
    Boston, Dan knew Rhonda was bad news he told the unknown guy to do
    what ever it takes to shut her up, but this relationship seem dead Christine
    was starting to fall for her boss but a good friend was in the way too she
    found herself in a three way love afare that holds a market value to her
    dream Mr.A.W.Kermit was a very deep lover, after the long weekend on
    her return home, Thomas sitting on the sofa, sofely spoke hello sweetheart
    how was the trip come here and sit down let's talk, Christine seem a little
    afraid walking slowly thinking how could he know, from her own guilt
    baby i've had my share and done wrong i love our home this apartment
    and hope you never leave me with memories here, with tears walling in her
    eyes she spoke softly i too have cross some lines but what you did has
    took a told on me stressed me and cost me time away , i was left alone
    and if it wasn't for a dear friend from college i would have cracked up!
    Thomas looked deep in her face, Do you love him, why no ! it was you
    i loved but you took that away,I knew all along what was going on with
    the late nights with who i thought was a friend (Rhonda) but i have a new
    life a new way of life and how life is, you really don't understand so it's time
    we let go and move on, No baby No ! you can't do this to me not now i'm
    so .........so sorry !
    The things Rhonda did to hurt peoples was about to turn
    three days later she was closing up and leaving out a Man in a black mask
    jump out, give me you purse and all the jewery now! he yell, pulling her in
    the back of the building, Please take it all she cried out, Lady it's not the
    money or the jewery i want, in her mind she knew what he wanted, in a
    dry tear she said you can have it i'm willing! the strange man looked at her
    again wrong give me your keys to the car, i'm not here for sex i don't rape
    people i kill people your time is up, quickly two blast sound off he ran as she
    laid capside on the ground in a pool of blood.
    On call big Jack heard the call on the radio and rush to her aid,
    the news spread fast and in the morning paper,Thomas was shock to hear
    it and he knew everything was going to hit the fan now, Dan told kathy
    about his pln but he swore he had nothing to do with it, as the mystery
    of the shooter is investigated, big Jack was leading up this investigation
    Rhonda was in the hospital in a coma two gunshot wounds, Thomas paid a
    visit to see her, Toney when off to Jersey city, Willie learn of it in prison
    two weeks later and vow to seek out who did it even if it cost his life once
    he get out! Officer O'conner and big Jack asking question now as they pay
    visit to Thomas, where was you on the night of april 23rd at 9:30PM?
    I was home cooking a meal for my wife, I never left home and sorry to hear
    about this but, cutting him off, didn't you have a conflict with her , Yes but!
    and didn't you make a statement you would kill her, yes but! everytime
    cutting him off, we ask that you don't leave town at any point until we
    complete our full investigation is that clear. Yes sir, where is your wife?
    she not here, where can we fine her, she work at the stock exchange on
    5th and maine, Thank you we'll be in touch.
    Thomas called Dan after they left, did you hear what happen was it your
    guy, No Dan said but i have a feeling it was Toney she had a run in with him
    a few months ago , yeah! i remember now and how she did Maryann too
    cost her that teaching job, The cops learn that Rhonda had many peoples
    wishing her dead, Christine heard it on the radio and call home, Thomas
    was telling her the police asked about her too and question him, not sad
    at all Christine left work knowing it was time to break it off with A.W.
    within the next two months Rhonda was still in a coma, Thomas and
    Christine was together happier and Toney was afraid to come back knowing
    they would try to pen him with this, but if he didn't do it why run was the
    talk on the street, and what happen to Maryann,Willie home now and on the
    street looking for Toney,Police start gethering up all the evidence, names
    was flairing up and Rhonda had died ! it was Murder one. 2 counts
    she was in fact pregnant.
    what happen to Rhonda was bad but she had did so many wrong for her
    own little glory hurting everybody she get near, if she would have stop her
    wicked ways she might be alive today, Christine would have love to get even with her, and Thomas had his share of her but didn't want to see her
    dead but who did it !? he was in love with the victim but his wife has all
    the reason to do it,the suspect list grew asking all to come down and make
    a statement after everyone left the police said keep an eye on those two
    Christine and Thomas they are our prime suspects with all the reasons,
    motive and substanceual evidence,Kathy & Maryann was together saying
    Rhonda had so many eminees anybody could have done it,Christine rush
    to call her lawyer but Thomas was thinking about the once great love
    they shared and the death of his child which he hope no one knows about
    but Rhonda was hell on feet and she talks, but who knows and can it get
    out he became a villain in the night working the streets to clear him self
    still kathy had a feeling Christine knew something, the next day officer
    O'conner call Christine back to the station downtown for more questioning
    she quickly called her lawyer and Thomas to meet her their, after four
    hours big Jack told her she was under arrest for the murder of Ms.Rhonda
    Kinzal on two counts and bail will be set in the morning, she cried out,
    I had nothing to do with it , I have proof , Please! listen it wasn't me.
    In tears and she was taken away, sorry Thomas but your wife lead us
    on a investigation that link her to the crime, her lawyer quickly asked
    do you have a weapon, fingerprints or something that link my client?
    No sir not at this time we don't but what we have is seal in evidence
    and court ordered take it up with the Judge sir.
    Did she really do it and where is the evidence to prove it
    or was it Toney, could Maryann played a roll in it , who was under
    the black mask man or woman ? did Dan have the hit man take her
    out that night or was it Thomas the answer lay ahead in part III

    Who shot Rhonda!
    a Rude awaking awaits da mind

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  2. MzBlkAngel

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    ok i am hook
    this is a prime time soap
    i am loving this story wow
    awaiting pt 3
    i wanna know who did it i thought
    Dan had it done but they took christine
    man pt 3 please
     
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    Thankz Angel.......the after math of Rhonda still lingering
    and poor christine on top and a powerful woman is on the
    hook to be hit with it but how !? no weapon, no prints, only motive,
     
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    Hmmmm....Talk about a who done it. So many suspects, might even be someone we don't know....You've got me wondering, pulled me into this drama. Guess we'll all have to wait for part two....:)
     
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    hummmmmmm! sistah watz it's intense and full of drama !
    so many had a reason but who had the guts to do it
    is yet to be seen! but i'm banking that it was a female.
    pt.III coming soon of a mystery to unfold seem like i'm da P.I now...
    Thank you for entering a tale of drama at Apartment 244B
     
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    what goes around, comes around and Rhonda definitely got hers. serves her right. yes, the question is, who done it? pt.3 please, dont keep us waitin. :)
     
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    indeed i won't it get scary to who we know why !
    thank u for coming inside apartment 244B sarcasm4eva
     
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    crazy how life can twist on you and turn
    what seem a winner is always a loser
    Rhonda learn the hard way paying with her
    life but who is the shooter ? take da poll !
     
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    I was just an innocent bystander quietly minding my own business when I saw my boy Rich had made a drop and I just wanted to check it out and see if I could share a little love with the dude.

    I click over to the scene and the title alone rocks my little world. Who Shot Rhonda? You will understand my consternation when you remember that my name is Rhonda. But I don't know if it was courage or curiosity or some compelling force that led me to read the story.

    Now I have to go back and find part one but I'm looking forward to part three.
     
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    o'my wow!!!!
    this was one i been writting for years the whole book is nice
    but wow! ya name is Rhonda ......
    Thanks for visiting apartment 244B
     
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