Black Poetry : anytime...is aiight.

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    {The End of Time}

    when the skies are clear and bright
    ...a sunshiny blue
    even when you're bored
    with nothing more to do
    you take a nice stroll
    by an ocean, calm and blue
    listen
    as the waves
    breathes fresh life into you

    that's a good time

    when you're basking in the glow
    of love's aftermath
    breathing hard and loud
    ...drenched in love-making sweat
    reality is brought back
    with a gentle caress
    you're thinking,
    "i'll take that one
    yeal,
    everyone i can get"

    That's a good time

    when your clouds are dark and gray
    sinking in a somber mood
    lights
    cameras
    got you drowning in your blues
    as you meditate on death
    ...the **** for life you're going through
    when the future has no meaning
    the sunshine smile can't get to you

    That's still a good time

    when the horrors of life
    jump right in your way
    and you're thinking
    "****, y'all
    what is it today?"
    your peeps stood you up
    your enemies had your back
    gave a smile to the man
    'cause you didn't know how to act

    that was a good time

    when the troubles of the world
    hang heavy on your shoulder
    all life around you is tyyght
    while your world is getting colder
    your woman walked away
    ...man couldn't take it no longer
    yet, inside, you felt the beat
    of a heart that's growing stronger

    anytime is good

    tick tock goes the clock
    as your life thread ticks away
    but the fat lady haven't sang
    so you're living for today
    although, the end of the road
    is approaching very fast
    you shout it from the roof top
    "all of y'all can kiss my azzzzzz"

    please....

    it's all good.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMMMM!! BALLER

    ANY TIME IS ALL GOOD INDEED:D
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aiight...aiight.

    thanks for the read, $$RICH$$.

    peace.
     
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    in agreeance

    anytime is a good time when God breathes life into you to see another day!!!

    thank you baller!:D
     
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    I love that last line !!!!
    my round , high, firm , black behind
    lolololol
    but seriously though I am in total agreement
    Its all good !;)
    :p :p :p :p
     
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    While reading your poem, anticipating it's ending. It was TOTALLY SURPRISING! But oh so pleasantly. Sometimes shouting that out or merely whispering it to yourself can relieve so much stress. Great piece! Coco
     
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