Quiet Poetry Lounge : Antithesis

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cherryblossom, Jul 1, 2009.

  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Were his feelings really the same as what I felt?
    Did I really see what I thought I saw?
    Or was it all an illusion
    Just a contradictory profusion
    Of warped perceptions?

    Did his "no" really mean "yes"
    And did his "yes" really mean "no?"
    Did his lips say "I want to stop"
    While his heart said, "I want to go?"

    Was his "I will
    " really "I wont"
    Was his "I won't" really "I will"
    Did I truly believe that he would, my void, fill
    Or was I just caught up in the thrill?

    Was his "I can't" really "I CAN but don't want to"
    Was his "I can" really "I CAN'T and I'll only disappoint you?"

    Truly, did ALL this I miss?
    Just caught up in the bliss
    Of his arms around me... and his kiss?
    Did I not get the memo? Did ANY of it really exist?
    Or was he just so deceptively clever and remiss
    In telling me the truth
    While I am left confused as I reminisce
    Wrapped in the ambiguities of Antithesis.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lemme just give you a round of applause right now :) sounds like somethin i'd write...always analyzin
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Heyyy. What can I say? I'm a Pisces. :cool: lol

    And thank you so much for the praise!
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    of course. and i thought over analyzin was an aquarius thing...hmm
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Nope!

    Like MJ said, "You are not alone." lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let me bow to you sis......keep flowin ya poetic spray is deep