Spoken Word : Antimatter Reality

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  1. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord I pray to thee
    That from this life you’ll set me free
    Please take this pain you see
    I can’t live like this
    Can’t survive on lies
    Please help me to open my eyes
    Please help me to realize
    That there is a way out of this maze this daze
    This Antimatter Reality

    Black dreams flow through silent streams as Dope Fiends
    Scream for Cream and I stride the mean streets lookin for my Queen
    I the King demean the scene by refusing to bow
    Or kowtow to the power of clouded thinking

    This dream awakens ancestral memories of you and I
    A love so sublime living lives of quiet desperation
    Lost not found in Ghettos of silent sound
    Societies darkest aspirations awaken promiscuous
    Sinners to the possibility of life beyond these city streets
    But I still can’t see what the lord has promised me
    But I promise to do and say
    Whatever it takes to get away
    From this Antimatter Reality

    Lord I pray to thee
    That from this life you’ll set me free
    Please take this pain you see
    I can’t live like this
    Can’t survive on lies
    Pleas help me to open my eyes
    Help me to realize
    That there is a way out of this maze this daze
    This antimatter reality

    Can’t you believe what your mind can conceive
    Your eyes they tell you lies
    And your ears bring your fears to life
    Dope Fiends calling life seems to be stalling
    You’re falling
    Strife as a weapon used by demons of darkened lust
    Angel Dust and Crack Cocaine dull our brains
    That Ganja be makin us stronger connecting us at the
    Base level to Demonic Dimensions too many to mention


    Let me not forget the narcotic seed of psychotic need
    And yet I bless this Holy Crest as we bleed on our knees
    Eyes wide crying thinking of suicide
    Take me lord we ask the task is to hard
    The burden to heavy
    And so I fall before you

    Lord I pray to thee
    That from this life you’ll set me free
    Please take this pain you see
    I can’t live like this
    Can’t survive on lies
    Open my eyes
    Help me realize
    That there is a way out of this maze this daze
    This antimatter reality
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful
     
  3. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good lookin'

    ...rich. i appreciate the time you took to listen to my piece. rahkyt
     
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    :wave: Ohhhhhhhhh My Brother Alter Ego :wave:

    :jumping: Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh My Brother !!!!!!!!!!!! :jumping:

    This ... YOU ... are AWESOME !!!!!!! WOWWWWWWWW !!!!

    Please Please Please Please Please send me your CD !!!! I know you have a CD My Brother ... you must have a CD ... oohhhhhh Please send me your CD so that i may play your words and your sounds and your peace and your spirit in our own live, 24 hour voice chat ... www.************ ... oh my gosh !!!! ... the Family does not know the wisdom and depth and skill and beauty you've brought to us ... oh my goodness ... wow ... yes, please My Brother ... send me your CD ... so i can play you for our Family night and day ... wow ... why haven't you been in our live voice chat My Brother ??? ... you are so very welcome ... surely you know that ... wow ... i will be looking forward to embracing you there ... wow ... thank you for being and sharing here ... thank you so very much ... such a great gift from our Ancestors!

    Our Family is growing so fast, i stay so busy, miss so much ... but God did not let me miss this ... beautiful work My Brother.

    Destee
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    (where to send the CD) :wink:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Wow! Took me 15 minutes to download on this old computer. it was worth the wait. Thanks Alter
     
  6. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sista destee...

    ...unfortunately, i do not have a cd. i have numerous pieces, but no burner on my home computer. i do plan on getting one in the near future tho', and when i do, i'll send you a copy. i do not own the rights to the beats that i use, so i cannot share this music on a pay-basis, but as long as there is no money involved, and the beat creator (for this piece, metal gear solid) is properly credited, there should be no problem with the piece's posting.

    thank you for checkin' my work, sista. you have a wonderful site. i spend most of my time over at urbanpoetics, but it is nice to branch out sometimes. take care,

    peace and progress!
     
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