Black Poetry : ...anticipation.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can hard-ly wait
    for you to once more
    inhabit my space…

    …expectancy
    makes me ache
    as i eager-ly await
    the return of your
    tri-lateral caresses—
    mind
    body
    soul
    … deep…
    that’s how you touch me

    & i am losing control
    of the ability to
    think coherent-ly
    …on anything…
    other than how
    i am desperate-ly
    seeking the next
    opportunity to
    give in & live in(side)
    …your embrace

    anxious-ly… i yearn
    for your taste… & the
    way you cause my
    heart to race… when
    your fingertips
    & softlips trace
    my body&face leaving
    long-lasting impressions
    of you… on me…

    & truthful-ly…
    its not like anything
    i’ve ever been allowed
    to experience before
    …that’s how i know
    that i am yours
    & you are mine…
    until time unravels
    & God reveals himself
    to us…

    …i am anticipating mylove.

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yes!

    A salivating piece of poetry--I loved it--well done. Clever use of words caught me immediately--Amun-Ra

    :cool:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ra. alwaysthanks!! when you find the time to
    grace my work with your presence... it's a very good
    thing!! :D ...i appreciate you!!
     
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    No Doubt GA!!

    You always seem to get a brutha caught up in your love pieces!!
    I'm Lovin the anticipation u got going up in here!! Tyte!!
    Keep it Hot Sis!! Cus u Sizzlin!!:)
     
  5. j'hiah

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    o.k i admit i won't read a lotta love poetry line for line,
    but you're an exception ultra head :D

    nfinite love you
    jh.
     
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    I like this groove Elayne...

    :love: does wonders for some don't it??? :laugh:

    Keep it coming baby!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    "i yearn for your taste..."

    anxiously awaiting
    the next time your face touches mine
    too much time has passed
    since our last
    tri-lateral caress
    mind
    body
    soul
    my heart has been blessed
    with
    beautiful
    things
    wonderful.:)

    THANKS FOR FLOWING.
     
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    Gurrrl

    You did it again. Got these men folk giving rave reviews on a beautiful poem. :jumping:
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    rashad. thank you for allowin' me to get ya caught up!
    your replies mean soooo much!!

    sherrie. you know i'm anticipatin' you, chile!! umm...
    jess not right ni! :lol: but i loves you!!

    jp (aka huge dome). you betta read my pieces word
    for friggin' word!! or i'll know!! & i'll tell mama! :D thanks
    darlin'!! i appreciate you!!

    bighead. mmm hmm... it sho does wonders!! & i am
    lovin' it... ta death!! :lol: i'm lovin' you too!! :tongue:

    b. no! thank YOU for flowing!! :D it's always a
    pleasure to be blessed with your presence. you know dat!

    sista j. well... you know... what can i say? :lol:
    serious-ly, tho! thank you for takin' the time to stop
    by. & these menz make my heart smile, chile!! :)

    :heart: ...& itsallLove, chirens!! :heart:
     
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    you and your talent are gifts to the world..scribe on sister scribe on..you alays have a friend in me. peace

    verb
     
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