Black Haiku : Anticipation

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His lips moist with words...
    Sprays my soul with a sea breeze.
    His mist revives me.

    Beads surface my skin
    In joy's anticipation...
    I receive his love.

    This is beautiful...
    The righteous rhythm of love
    Within my chamber.
     
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    Oh gurrrrrl! You be workin' da hell outta some haikus!! :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sistah Queeneth
    ya Haikus be too tyght and on da money
    dis flow u pose is out of reach
    lovin it ............keep Haikus me happy! u go gurl!!!
     
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    Thank You Poets

    Ms N.: I am glad you definitely :lol: enjoyed...gurl you are crazy!

    Rich: I shall endeavor to do just dat. Thanks for showin' some love.:kiss:
     
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    beautifully sizzlin'
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks BE...glad you enjoyed!
     
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    i enjoy ya work
    Haiku maketh me happy
    forth it touch my soul
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm glad you were touched
    That's what poetry should do...
    Touch the souls of men. :)
     
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    Beautiful illustration of magnificent consummation.
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeedy...thanks for the read sis. :)
     
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