Black Poetry : Anticipation

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve longed for you my entire life
    Dreamed that one day you would be my wife
    Though I never knew your name
    I loved you just the same
    I knew that destiny will always have her way
    And that our meeting would happen one day
    So I hold on with anticipation
    Until I receive that great revelation
    That it is our time
    To scribe together in rhyme
    As we both become one in heart
    Together forever, never to depart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see love flows

    perfectly in sync and ya tunes of jazz is playing
    loud the true destiny is in yo handz

    man i like this one here...............................:toast:
     
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    Bishop

    You put everything I once felt into words. Only I was waiting in anticipation for my yet to be husband. This was beautiful. It gave me hope once again.

    VirtuousDove
     
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    another classic of the yesteryears arise .....
     
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    Very nice scribe of Bishop's to bring back Rich. Genuinely sweet and endearing drop.
     
  6. Legendof_1_Spirit

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    smooth...

    <fades in>

    Man this was/is a smooth pice of writing. and the flow easy as a summer breeze coming in off the ocean.

    <fades out>
     
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