Black Poetry : anticipation pt.4

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    5:00 two months after the drama, between u and..."Kelly" unfolded in my face....


    there is a knock at the door
    i'm sippin a cup of coffee... :coffee:
    when i hear a knock at the door...
    who could this be? i ask myself
    as i pad lazily down the stairs
    and open the door...
    and who do i see but u.. :puke:
    but this tyme something is wrong...
    ur clothes are dirty,
    ur hair is MESSED UP,
    ur scratched and bruised,
    you say:"me and kelly had a fight"
    i say:"i see"
    you say "can i come in"
    i say: "hellz naw"
    you say:" but pleaze baby,
    she took my clothes,
    kicked me out of her house,
    they are going to foreclose on mine...
    i just need a place to stay for a while"


    my man calls my name from the bedroom
    we had just made love...
    (hey, i said i was sippin some coffee :D )

    he comes down
    an air of dominance around him
    a black-adonis...
    he kisses me on my collar-bone
    sending shivers down my spine...

    my man says: "who is this?"
    he eyes u up and down

    noone i say and close the door in your face....

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again u laid it out to perfection
     
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    nice very nice..flow on...:Angel:
     
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    Yo.......this was just as tyte as the rest......I see this tyme you didn't need the Advil....maybe you should have given him the Advil this tyme before you slammed the door in his face.....(*smiles*).....but fo real though.....I liked

    foxy..........
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...maybe i should have given him the Advil....well glad u liked it,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    he will need more then the pill to ova come the slammmmmm!!
     
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    as the story is told
    nice one baby gurl:)
    Peace
     
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    lol...I loved this story....lol
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks glad u liked it
     
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    So, bro man got kicked to the curb, where he belongs..I enjoyed this read.
     
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