Black Poetry : anticipation pt.3

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    9:00....42 messages and one week later...

    i awoke from my almost eternal slumber,
    sleep clouding my eyes
    and leaving me pondering
    a dream i can't remember,
    when i heard a knock at the door
    (hellz naw i know dis ain't who i think it is!)
    thoughts race through my mind
    as i turn the doorknob slowly.....
    (****...)
    there u are smug, wit a look of satisfaction on ur face,
    "what do u want?"
    "to let u know that i've moved on"
    "okayyyy, wonderful, now u can leave me the hell alone"
    i start to close the door,
    when some anorexic barbie bimbo
    latches onto ur arm
    anger rises in me....
    my heart breaks into a million pieces
    and shatter at my feet.....
    even now i still love u...
    though i hate u...
    for all those times u cheated on me....
    "i have a new women now...ain't that right kelly?"
    "yeah baby..."

    i slam the door in ur face...
    i'm going to be needing that Advil again...

    to be continued.....

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    INDEED can work ya head in a pain unheard of
    this was tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    this was a tight flow...peace:angel1:
     
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    Awwww......that was cool.......I liked that.......the message was tyte.....and I liked the vibez that flowed through it.......this piece is amazing......I loved this story......

    foxy.......
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks i'm glad u liked it,
    love,
    -story
     
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    [email protected] wit a bony chic too?!? thas just wrong :lol:
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...yeah gurl its like that, but he bone get his....watch me...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    I feel like calling the posse out on him..You've got me into this...ok let me read on to see what happens...
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um humm the ending is tyte, u'll like it..
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    me too...let me read on...and the wonderful thing is..
    i don't know if i am reading front to back or baack to front..
    but i am counting down....now...to 2
     
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