Black Poetry : anticipation pt.2

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    7:00 two days after the heart break of finding out ur escapades with another.....

    sit at home
    as the tunder booms
    outside my window
    and rain pours
    on my windows,
    and this house
    that isn't a home
    he cut through my heart
    the phone rings....
    bring
    bring
    bring

    my palms lie dead
    on the bed sheets,
    ur voice invades and pushes
    away my thoughts
    ur voice calls me
    "u know i love u baby" (whatever)
    "i was at a late meeting" (these photos from the detective says something else)
    "pick u the phone boo " (never)
    "please, i was workin late" (i'm tired)
    soon the beep took over
    and i fell into a troubled slumber.....

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'yessssssssssssss
    dis what i be talking bout
    i want more !!!
    lovin it
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    oh wonderful flow...love it...:angel1:
     
  4. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this is tyte!
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

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    different...and i love it...
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u all im glad u like it...maybe i will bring in a pt.3.....
    love,
    -story
     
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    Oh my......this was very tyte.......exspecially when it's tied to the other one......I'm lovin this.....Anticipation......nice......the name has a ring to it........tyte....
     
  8. Bluewater

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    tell the story ...the story
    liking your drop indeed
    Peace
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice.

    Next time pick up the phone & say it loud & clear, "YOU'RE BUSTED!"
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh yes this just came to mind this afternoon, glad u liked it, i didn't want to put it on here at first because i thought it would be to different from my original style...but i guess it turned out a hit

    love,
    -story
     
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