Black Poetry : Anticipation Of You

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhh...
    i’m wakin’ up
    its daybreak

    yessssssss...
    I don’t have school
    so why do I wake?

    mmmmmm...
    home alone
    parents on a vacate

    yeahhhhh...
    so I want you and me
    to commemorate

    ringgggg...
    I call you up
    and you answer

    vrommm....
    you get in your car
    as swiftly as Prancer

    what the hellll?...
    I can’t move
    but i’m full of life

    damnnnn...
    I can’t breath
    but I have no strife

    oh my goddd...
    seems like forever
    is how long its takes

    mmmmmm...
    for you to drive over
    and soothe my aches

    shyttttttttttt...
    I don’t exactly
    what’s wrong with me

    damnnnn...
    I feel all giddy
    light and free

    ohhhhh...
    baby what’s takin’ so long?

    cuzzzzzz...
    I’m in deep over my head
    from the anticipation of your love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin dis here coz it spells
    out my name
    at day break i zoommmm!
    to claim a moment of ya heart
    dis where love truely start
    in a maze of ya beauty
    a flame of steam
    i cannot breath
    what is it that makes me so hot
    now that i'm here on the spot
    i glance once and see
    it was she woooooooooooweeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    THEY'RE HERE...

    I felt this-

    1poetsought ~
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks both of you, this came straight from experience....if u can't tell that already...lol
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have a question...do ya'll think this poem is too juvenile?
     
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    this came straight from experience...

    You've kept it real
    Made us smile
    Right on time
    Not juvenile


    1poetsought ~
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for ur input :)
     
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    juvenile cannot be
    it was a true lovin treat
    u hit it wit true line
    love da scribe
    makes u step inside
    no it's not at all
    $$RICH$$ just made da call
     
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    very nice...
     
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    i like that...thanks rich and thanks blackwizdom :)
     
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