Black Poetry : Anticipation - a PositiveMindset & Seduction29 concoction

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a piece my cousin & I composed as a little introduction 2 her appearance here.
    Hope y'all enjoy the vibe.

    ~Seduction29~

    Is it my turn yet, do I get my chance?
    Patiently I sat with a watchful eye hoping you would notice
    But you didn't.
    A part of me died.
    I guess that's what happens when you hold your breath.
    My breath as I inhaled was caught in a thought.
    The thought was of you and the lust you brought.
    Reminding myself to breathe, exhaling my breath
    The rise and the fall brought attention to my breast.
    Now there is a quirk in my smile, a glint in my eye...
    Every thought of you has my fingers caressing my thighs.
    This is so unfair to me...
    There should be two bodies creating this heat.
    You should be here...
    Where are you and what would you do?
    That question leads my hands to touch...
    wishing it was you...
    exhale...
    Not yet.
    Where are you, what would you do?



    ~PositiveMindset~

    My eyes rest on your beauty from across the room
    And I say 2 myself, she;s gonna be mine soon.
    But being that I'm shy I don't make that 1st move.
    So I just watch U sit & smile with your friends.
    Imagining how much fun we'd have if I was your man,
    Pleasurable moments would never end.
    My soul would be enriched by just holding your hand.
    How I wish that I could hold U close smelling the scent of your skin.
    Feeling your lips press passionately against mine would truly be a blessing.
    What can I possibly do 2 express 2 U my emotions?
    I want 2 place a ring on your finger 2 prove my devotion.
    But I don't know U.
    When I paint a beautiful picture with U & I, I can't show U.
    So I display it in a gallery in my mind &
    charge myself millions of emotions 2 view it.
    If genies were real & I had one, I'd misuse it.
    Wishing time immortal 4 U 2 be with me.
    And after I have U, 4 U 2 stay until a day after eternity.


    ~Seduction29~

    First to hold you captive in my dreams...
    Now you across the room in an arm's reach in front of me.
    Thank you...
    Forgive me for acting like a schoolgirl with a silly attraction
    Just to watch your body language gives me an intense satisfaction.
    Look at me looking at you.
    Can you feel me raping your soul?
    I want to know...
    How easy it would be to place myself in your future.
    I can love you as if I was the air in love with nature.
    Your energy just from that look you give is pulling me toward you..
    As if the laws of gravity were commanded to pause by you...
    Half way to you on my way to completeness
    When I get there just let your mind speak.
    Pull me in
    Let my body fit to yours
    Like a missing puzzle piece
    When I get there....


    ~PM~

    Hello...
    How are U?
    I don't know if U noticed but I've been watching U 4 a while.
    Captivated by your beautiful face, held prisoner by your smile.
    Thinking 2 myself I can't continue living with myself if I didn't take this chance...
    So here I stand.
    I'm not gonna beat around the bush,
    2 put it simply, I was entranced by your exotic look.
    And I see us together from now until time repeats...
    Until it rains upwards & the sun falls into the sea.
    U are an angel sent 2 fulfill my every need.
    A beautiful succubus from my dreams
    who'll turn my fantasies into reality.
    If U give me a little time I'll make U so happy that U were mine.
    I'd love U so completely it would be like commiting a crime.
    I'll give U all U want physically,
    & everything U need mentally.
    All I need in return is U.
    Tell me, would that be something you'd be interested in?
    A man who'd put time with U ahead of chillin' with his friends.
    And since I don't watch football, Sundays would be your day.
    We wouldn't get out of bed, we could just talk, caress, & play.
    I'll explore every contour of your body,
    My chore would be 2 give U more satisfaction
    And give U an outlet when you're getting naughty.
    Please forgive me if I'm being 2 forward & direct...
    I just have 2 tell U how I feel.
    I've never felt so strong about someone I just met.
    And I was once told if your heart holds a strong feeling about something, trust it.
    So here I stand...
    Give me your hand...
    May I have this dance?
     
  2. HODEE

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    This is :hot: Seduction29.. I like how you laid it down. Positive Mind. You came through and made this flow come alive. You both brought the heat.

    Seduction.. let me ask. have you posted on Daily Diva. Welcome here, I enjoyed your poet flow. Positive your cousin does hold her own.

    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: five star flow here.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    i likes this....
    bring us some more....
    yes indeed very nice....:angel1:
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Oh....WOW...

    Well...first things first....Seduction, Welcome to the family...loving your vibe
    and this line "Quote"...As if the laws of gravity were commanded to pause by you...(tyte)


    and Positive...you know....I have nothing but respect for you and your flow!


    But the two of you together...now this was just impressive
    "The talent is obviously genetic"...
    This truly captivated "Anticipation" at it's best... :wink:
     
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    whoa now...this is the a poetic masterpiece....
    can't wait for her arrival....word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    ****.....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    :eek:hmy: ;) :jawdrop:

    cousins huh......(smile)
    nice...very nice...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too much talent in one family...what gives? :) Can't really add much except to say this was lyrically wonderful. Welcome seduction29.
     
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    this is bliss
    yeah we like :)
    welcome to family
    loving this mix
    Peace
     
  10. seduction29

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    THANKS

    THANKYOU FOR RHE RESPONSE YOU GAVE. I WAS PRETTY NERVOUS ABOUT GETTING ON EVERYONE HERE SO FAR IS LIKE WHOA!!!!! NO I HAVNT BEEN TO THAT SITE. TELL ME MORE ABOUT IT.


     
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