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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PurpleMoons, Feb 18, 2004.

  1. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    A pearly white moon dipped in a purple lace
    inside it's core is the pressence of a face
    No one ever knew that the moon had a love
    That the sun was its lover reflecting its light on her
    She smiled many nights and she cried many days
    longing for the moment the shadows would creep up
    and she will see her life source sharing her space
    she smiles with vigor intentions as the warmth of
    his energy so gently embrace her force
    causing her to iluminate with pure emotional resource
    shimmers of her joy could be seen through out the sky
    and these tiny particles danced and sung songs of love
    She nevered visioned a moment when her sun would
    leave her side or a time when he would'nt be settled
    snuggly behind
    echoes of his vibrations whispered in her ear
    darkness took unidentified forms in the places where
    he'd once been
    although she knows it is destined for him to return
    her patience wear wearily and her heart is hung
    she blows butterfly kisses to all who soaks in her light
    as she waits patiently for the dawn of another
    sleepless night
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i likes this flow
    a calming peace
    with a spice of
    hot sauce...lol
    i dig this flow :angel1:
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinn: Nice Flow....Flow on........ :spinn: and on :spinn:
     
  4. PurpleMoons

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    Mzblkangel thank you for the reply sis! I,m glad you liked it. (smile)

    rasheed I do try to keep it flowing. Thanks!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you used the sun and the moon's images here, very creative flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribing lovin it all mix it up gurl !!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a wonderful flow..sis..
    flow on indeed:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Dang! Purple, I haven't seen anything from ya for a while, but this is a heckuva way to drop a fresh one. Very nice, sistah.
     
  9. luvNwords

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    very nice very nice
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ...nice sis
    i love this one right here!!!!
    had to bring it back...spicy mmhmm...
     
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