Black Poetry : Answer to "Will U Be My Wife"

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  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here it is...Told yall it was in the works! Thanks to everyone who helped me get on the ball and write what was in my heart!


    YES!!!!

    There once was an angel that told me I'd make it through
    It's the same guardian angel that brought me to you
    Now I thank my lucky stars, cause you've showed me love true
    Took my oh so broken :heart: and made it brand new
    There's oh so many things to say when it comes down to you
    I wanna be the one to make you smile, and wipe the tears when your blue

    Staying by your side during your bid has proved I'm the "one"
    And I promise to stay by your side until your time is done
    So when times get hard know that to my arms you can run

    So keep your head above the water and hold it up high
    At times when I need you most, I look to the sky
    Gazing at the stars I can almost stare in your eyes
    Can't wait to hold you in my arms and feel our souls unite

    You've made my heart beat again you're the only reason
    Ain't gotta ask twice, I promise I'm never leavin
    So yes i will be your wife til the day I stop breathin
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know it's kinda cheesy, but if you remember, so was his. I was trying to stay at that level with him. Let me know what you think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thanks again Fam!!:grouphug:
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi,

    This is a wonderful letter. I knew you could do it!!

    I wish you all the best!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sierra. Your words mean a lot to me!:heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was beautiful surely he will relate and honor dis ......
    very nice letter
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alizentang....

    this is beautifull...




    peace liberty
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful girl!!:)
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The cheesier the proposel, the better!!!!! :)
    Congrats!!!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks SwtT. stay tuned for a deeper version (laughs)
     
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